Co-Writing

I've got an idea. I'm going to post bits and pieces of a short story that I'm writing for a contest (a short story contest, believe it or not). Then you five (you know who you are...the ones who actually read my self-indulgent rants) can leave your comments about each part as I write it. You also get to play a game here too...try to guess where in the hell this story is leading. Hopefully by, oh I dunno...maybe the end of next week, it will be done in rough and you can then lambaste me with criticisms of the entire piece.

Think of it as a community writing exercise...mostly because I'm bored.

First few paragraphs will be up shortly, but first, I need more coffee.